Two things really stood out to me about this.
1. You don’t have any paragraph breaks. It makes it harder for me to read, which I think is good, because it has a more stream-of-consciousness approach that really puts a human feel on Lilith’s experience. Interesting approach.
2. At the end you have her talking about the Oankali failing to account for a human sense of identity. Until I read your blog, I’d only thought about the Human Contradiction (intelligence in service to hierarchical behavior) as being correct or incorrect; I hadn’t entertained the idea that it might just be reverse (hierarchical behavior responding to the intellectualized sense of identity).
Cool stuff. Made me think. Thanks. 